天帝 [てんてい] Tentei, the "Lord God Creator," which, I confess, are the first three words in the definition returned by WWWJDIC. I thought they looked good strung together.
"It's not personal. It's business." Not a literal translation, but close enough that I couldn't resist.
pg 185 "opposite shore, that now" the comma seems out of place.
ReplyDeletepg 194 "What man who bends his knee to another could be considering preeminent?" should be considered?
I was surprised one of the travelers said 'Kyouki' rather than 'the Taiho'.
Fixed. Thanks.
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