May 23, 2013
Tonan no Tsubasa (31)
Shuen (朱厭) means "red" + "detestable."
Labels: 12 kingdoms, tonan
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pg 290 "he actually enjoyed tearing its victims apart" should be 'his' and needs a period at the end.
pg 291 "Turning his gaze back to the savanna, couldn’t make out any other prey close by." should be 'he couldn't'?
I can't say I agree with Ono's decision to tell this chapter from the Youma's perspective. It was a little anti-climactic and would have been more dramatic and intense from the attackers' view. Oh well.
pg 291 "Turning his gaze back to the savanna, couldn’t make out any other prey close by." should be 'he couldn't'?
I can't say I agree with Ono's decision to tell this chapter from the Youma's perspective. It was a little anti-climactic and would have been more dramatic and intense from the attackers' view. Oh well.
